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22 thoughts on “Augusta”

1. Paul Beech says:

   January 28, 2015 at 8:56 am

   Wild! Funnily enough, Donna, the faster I read, the more it all sort of gels. Poor Augusta!

   I suspect you’re into the Imagists too? My favourites include Richard Aldington and William Carlos Williams.

   Cheers,

   Paul

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   • alittlebirdtweets says:

     January 28, 2015 at 6:49 pm

     Thanks Paul. This started out as a free-write on the train, using a random picture as inspiration. Then at 2am the following morning I condensed it.

     I have never heard of the imagists, are they an art movement? I will Google the names shortly 🙂

     Thank you.

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2. Joseph Pinto says:

   February 12, 2015 at 5:17 pm

   Absolutely loved this!

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   • alittlebirdtweets says:

     February 12, 2015 at 7:16 pm

     Thank you, Joseph 🙂

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3. bookworm2426 says:

   March 5, 2015 at 1:54 pm

   Strangely yet beautifully lyrical…in between the lines… Words beyond the song..you have made the seen unseen

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   • alittlebirdtweets says:

     March 6, 2015 at 6:53 pm

     Wow, thanks so much for your beautiful comment. Have a wonderful weekend 🙂

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     • DearLife says:

       March 6, 2015 at 7:07 pm

       You too…happy writing never stop believing in yourself.I provide and seek inspiration in others… And i have no doubt that i have found it……continue bwing a source of inspiration….:-);-)

     • alittlebirdtweets says:

       March 6, 2015 at 7:12 pm

       Ditto, DearLife! Thank you for your inspiration and your kind words 🙂

4. andywritespoems says:

   April 4, 2015 at 1:24 pm

   Hadn’t read this before, must have missed it 🙂 Really simple and lovely. I nominated you for the Creative Blogger Award by the way 🙂 If you need to know the rules and everything I’ve got them all on my post: https://andywritespoems.wordpress.com/2015/04/04/creative-blogger-award-thanks/ Keep writing!!

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   • alittlebirdtweets says:

     April 5, 2015 at 10:46 am

     Hi Andy. Thanks so much for reading and for the nomination, much appreciated. Happy Easter to you 🙂

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5. Dan says:

   April 30, 2015 at 1:07 am

   I’m not into poetry and feel like I’m missing something. I liked ‘Augusta’ but have to admit I don’t understand it completely… must be something wrong with my wiring.

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   • alittlebirdtweets says:

     April 30, 2015 at 7:32 am

     Hi Dan. There’s certaintly nothing wrong with your wiring! All art, writing, design, will be interpreted differently by different people; sometimes they won’t be able to interpreted it at all. The wonderful thing about poetry and flash fiction is that it is often left to the reader’s imagination.

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     • ThePower&TheG says:

       July 6, 2015 at 6:18 pm

       Respectfully the reader usually has little of it – imagination – in this age of instant gratification – I adore your blog – tremendous work – ART one can sink it’s teeth into

     • alittlebirdtweets says:

       July 6, 2015 at 9:03 pm

       Thank you so much for your kind words, much appreciated 🙂

     • ThePower&TheG says:

       July 6, 2015 at 9:17 pm

       https://thelighteningandthefire.wordpress.com/2015/02/09/the-soy-blues/ Use your imagination now 🙂

     • alittlebirdtweets says:

       July 7, 2015 at 7:25 am

       I have just read your poem. I like the imagery and the sense of lyric. A well written piece 🙂

     • ThePower&TheG says:

       July 7, 2015 at 1:09 pm

       Thank you

6. hearingjubilee says:

   September 29, 2015 at 5:00 pm

   Really sweet words and flow. Thanks for the read and the interest. Sspt your work is beautiful (whisper).

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   • alittlebirdtweets says:

     September 29, 2015 at 5:02 pm

     Thank you so much for your kind words…they are truly appreciated. 🙂

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7. gspottedpen says:

   January 5, 2016 at 3:03 am

   When I read into your words …I enjoy it like an abstract painting.Yes, that’s aesthetic of Postmodernism, the transcending of sense to significations that are new, imaginative and abstract like art and music. Anand Bose from Kerala

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   • alittlebirdtweets says:

     January 5, 2016 at 7:37 am

     Hi Anand Bose. Happy New Year! Thank you so much for your kind and inspirational words on this piece, it’s much appreciated. I do try to find new and deeping meanings in which to portray the Universal senses and emotions. Best Wishes. Donna

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     • gspottedpen says:

       January 5, 2016 at 7:50 am

       Thank you Donna.

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