Bang, Bang

You’re an ember travelling on the dinghy of life, you’re a soul that struggles to breathe, your troubled darkened soul smiles at me through listerine coated teeth, the release from life is in your finger, as you’re squeezing down the trigger, you snigger, you wilter, you fall like a feather, I tell you’re better, much better than this, and I see your palm turn face up, your palm of light is a burning fight, an awakening scorch from the sun.

I yawn, and we are on the beach again with euphoria filled young minds, its sands dispense, its oceans surrender, our scars are fresh and tender. We’re curving our fingers into heart shapes, we’re holding them up to the horizon, we’ve joined the hearts together, and I held the burning question, will you marry me? then bang, bang, the gates had beckoned, bang, bang, you had been sectioned, from a trigger, a snigger, my little orange fizzler, my little feather in the glistening wind.

6 thoughts on “Bang, Bang

  1. alexraphael says:

    Great stuff. So good you’re sharing your work with us.

  2. Somehow we lost each other over the years, but I’m glad we’ve reconnected. I really enjoy what you do with words…

  3. JC says:

    Thank you so much for your words and for reading mine. I always look forward to your name in my box. I hope the family is doing fine… jc

    • Thanks JC, you are so kind! My family are doing well thanks. I hope you are keeping well too. You are so dedicated to posting on WP…it’s a great achievement 👏 I enjoy reading your work. Best Wishes. Donna

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